Friday, November 2, 2012

Nanowrimo - Day #1

Hey all, it's been a couple of months again, but I'm not done yet. I'm participating in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) and I've decided to take this story and continue it for the month. The idea is to write 50,000 words in one month (yikes). I will be posting here as I complete sections of the story, and I still welcome suggestions, but I will (hopefully) be posting much more frequently than I expect people to keep up with. So feel free to toss me suggestions, or sit back and enjoy the story. If there is something you like, and want me to explore, mention it. If there is something you're not a fan of, you can let me know about that too! Thanks in advance for your support as I take on this daunting task.



Thomas quietly got up and headed out to explore the rest of the complex. It wasn't very big, and most of the rooms looked like the sleeping quarters he just left, so he decided not to disturb anyone. He found himself back in the armory from the night before, the few remaining candles having been burned very low. Soon the room would be dark, but for the small round window letting in just a bit of light from the pre-dawn sun. Thomas had never been one for religion, even before his daughter was taken, but there was something about this room, in this place. Perhaps it was the dream, perhaps the way the flickering light played around the room, or maybe because of the events of the previous night, but he felt an energy about the room, almost a presence. It felt like anticipation, a small speck of hope in a dark night. Something for him to hold on to. Thomas sat staring into the flames, back to a rack of weapons, until the last of the candles burned out.

Thomas didn't have to wait long after that for the others to wake up. Turns out that when you're a defender of the innocent and a crusader against the darkness, you get up when the sun does.

Benjamin walked into the room, breaking Thomas out of his reverie, “There you are. Couldn’t sleep, huh?”

Thomas took a moment before looking up from the now extinguished candles, “I dreamt of her again last night. About the night she…” Thomas’s voice trailed off as he tried to hide that he was getting choked up.

Benjamin placed a hand on Thomas’s shoulder, “Truly, I’m sorry for what happened to you. I can’t imagine what it would feel like to lose a child, especially with no explanation why.” He sat on the bench next to Thomas, “I can’t fix what happened, but I can offer you a chance to make sure that another father won’t have to go through what you have. To stop what happened in the coffee shop from happening to another poor girl.”

Thomas finally looked Benjamin in the eye, “Do I really have a choice? I’m already a target, and I can’t expect you to watch over me for the rest of my life. Besides, I would have done anything, given anything, to save Emily. How could I live with myself if I knew I could stop this from happening to someone else’s daughter, and chose not to?”

Benjamin smiled brightly, the effect seeming to take years off of his face, “I hoped that would be your answer. I think you’ll fit in well here. Everyone here has their own reasons for staying. Some might share, others… well, I wouldn’t recommend just asking.”

“So, what’s your story Ben?” Thomas asked with a small smirk. “You know all about me, so I think it’s only fair.”

“Ben huh? I suppose I can live with that. The Lord knows I’ve been called worse things. My story started a long time ago. I was a priest in a small Catholic parish outside Belfast in Northern Ireland. I was devout in my faith, but perhaps not quite so devout to the rules.” Ben stood up, and grabbed a few candles from an open box. He set to lighting them on the altar before he continued. “I spent my days tending to my small congregation, and I spent my nights in a manner unbecoming a man of the cloth. I was a charlatan, or so I thought anyway.

“Rural Ireland was a superstitious place, especially in the 70s. Whenever anyone got sick, or depressed, or started acting strangely, the religious types immediately jumped to possession. Myself, I was always for a more figurative translation of much of the Bible, rather than a literal, but that wasn’t the case for a lot of my parish members.” Ben’s voice takes on a rather bitter tone, “So I took advantage of them.”

“Well, I’m not congratulating you, but if it made them feel better, and you made a little off of it, where’s the harm?”

Ben sighed, “That’s what I thought too, but I was wrong. Very wrong.” Shaking his head, “This went on for some time, I’d pull out my Bible, say a few words, work them into a frenzy, and tell them that the spirit is gone, and after a couple of weeks, the victim should return to a more normal state, as long as there wasn’t too much psychological damage. I never expected that I would find someone that was actually possessed.”
Seeing Thomas’s eyes widen, Ben allows himself a small, wistful smile, “You’re still surprised, even with what you now know and have seen? I miss that, that… innocence. Where was I… ah yes, the girl. Her name was, Roisin I think. She was probably 8 years old, about the same age as your Emily.” Ben spared a glance for Thomas, silently apologizing. “It seemed like the usual, she was acting strangely, and her parents would hear strange sounds during the night, coming from her room. I took the job, thinking it was like any other. I was so wrong.”

Ben closed his eyes, watching the scene replay in his mind…

It was a dark night, overcast, and it was raining. It was the sort of cold cloying rain that seeps in to your very bones. Ben approached the house and he could feel a chill in the air. Something more than just the cold rain trickled down his spine. As he reached up to knock on the door, a feeling of dread settled in his stomach.

He had barely raised my hand to knock when a smallish woman, probably in her 40s opened the door. “Ms. O’Sullivan, good evening, may I?” He gestured inside.

“Of course reverend, please. My daughter is upstairs, she’s locked herself in her room, and won’t come out.” Ben quickly hung his hat and coat on the brass hooks near the door and followed Ms. O’Sullivan into the house. They quickly made their way upstairs, where they found Mr. O’Sullivan softly calling to his daughter through the door.

“Honey, Rev. McKree is here, he wants to help you.” He called through the door. “No!” came the reply through the door. However, it didn’t sound quite right; it was almost a scream of fear, rather than a scream of defiance. Her voice seemed to get choked off at the end.

Ben looked at the frightened husband and wife, “Has anything like this ever happened before? Does she have any history of acting out or rebelling against you like this?”

Ms. O’Sullivan, obviously distraught, replied, “Nothing like this, nothing more than any other willful child. She’s a good kid, but recently she’s been acting strangely; throwing tantrums, screaming for no reason. That wasn’t why we called you though; she began muttering to herself in Gaelic. She doesn’t know Gaelic.”

Ben thought to himself that she must’ve just picked it up at school, or from TV, but he placed a hand on her arm, “Don’t worry Mr. and Mrs. O’Sullivan, I’ve seen this kind of thing before. Nothing to worry about, she’ll be fine.” Ben stood up and put an ear to the door. “Roisin, sweetie? Will you let me in? I just want to talk to you. Your parents are worried about you, because they love you.”

Ben listened at the door, but he heard no answer. He heard nothing at all, no movement, no rustling, and not even any breathing. He raised his hand to knock again and as his knuckles rapped on the door, it swung silently inward. He whispered to the parents, “See? She wants to talk. I’ll go in first, I’ve dealt with this kind of thing before.

He pushed the door open the rest of the way, and made his way into the dark room. There was a window on the South wall, but the curtains were drawn, billowing slightly. The window must’ve been open, explaining the chill in the room. The only light was spilling in from the hallway. Ben could make out a dresser against one wall, a bed against the other, with a small night stand next to it. He could make out the silhouette of a young girl sitting on the edge of the bed.

Ben stepped in to the room, reaching to flip the lights on. “I’m going to turn the lights on, okay? Then we can talk.” There was no response from Roisin, so he went ahead and flipped the switch. There was a brief flash as the ceiling light kicked on, then blew out. As the light flashed, there was a loud slam. Ben whirled to find the door shut behind him. He could hear the muffled cries of the O’Sullivan’s outside the door as he tried to pull the door open. It was no use, the door was stuck tight.

At this point, Ben was nervous. Very nervous. He had never experienced anything like this before, and he thought he had seen it all. “Roisin? What’s wrong honey? Your parents are worried about you, they say this isn’t like you.” At the sound of his voice, the shadow that was Roisin cocked her head to the side, a quizzical motion. As Ben’s eyes adjusted to the gloom, he could make out more of the room. On the floor at the foot of the bed, there was a circle, made of various items. A jump rope, some stuffed animals, a rumpled t-shirt. They were arranged in such a way that the inner edge was a perfect circle.

“Did you make this?” Ben gestured to the circle, “It’s impressive, it must have taken a while to organize everything so perfectly.” He began to edge closer to Roisin. As he moved, he allowed some of the glow from the lights under the door to shine on Roisin. He wished he hadn’t. Her arms and face were covered with small, red scratches, like she had been digging at her skin. Her mouth was held in an amused grin, and her eyes… her eyes were empty. Ben couldn’t see anything in them.

Ben had been doing this long enough; he remembered that he was carrying his Bible. He had gone through the motions of an exorcism enough times that he could recite the lines, even if he was literally shaking in his boots. He began the litany that he had spoken so many times when he heard laughter coming from the direction of the girl. It couldn’t have been the girl, because it was a guttural, deep and terrifying sound. Ben was vaguely aware that the parents were shouting from outside the door. He was vaguely aware that he had stopped chanting. Mostly, he was aware of the laughter. He could see her shoulders shaking as if she were laughing, but the sound seemed to come from all around him, consuming him.

As the laughter died down, a voice came from Roisin, harsh and guttural, just like the laughter, “Please, don’t stop on my account Prrriest.” The voice was heavily accented, but Ben could not identify it. It seemed to spit the word “priest” as if it were distasteful. “It has been a while since anyone has… interrrrupted me. I can smell your fear, it is intoxicating.” Roisin’s body jerked itself upright, and walked over to the circle. She moved as if she were a marionette, and someone were jerking on the strings. Ben could do nothing, paralyzed with his fear.

“Watch, prrriest, and know you can do nothing. There is nothing left of the girl you knew as Roisin. I have consumed her, mind and soul. I care nothing for the body.” The girl was now standing in the center of the circle, the same expression on her face, as her dead eyes looked at Ben. “You, prrriest, I will let live. Your fear is heady, and I wish to dine on it again, when I am not so… satisfied. We will meet again.”

The booming, grating, horrible laughter began again, and suddenly everything happened at once. There was a sound as if all the air had been sucked out of the room. Roisin collapsed to the floor in a heap, as if the strings holding her up had been severed. Her parents burst into the room, the door no longer held shut, letting light spill into the room. In the center of it all stood Ben, silent and unmoving, too numb to react to what just happened, too scared to process it.

Mrs. O’Sullivan’s wail pierced the haze and everything came crashing in…

“Wow,” said Thomas, “I’m sorry, that sounds terrifying. Did you ever find the thing?”

Ben looked at Thomas, his age finally showing in his weary eyes. In a small voice, he replied, “Yes.” Ben stretched, and shook his head, “I think that’s enough for now, why don’t you come with me, you can meet Father Adrian, and Karen.”